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Gerald Washington's avatar

What a powerful ending and twist! Forgiveness can be hard to do at times, but Liam did it. I salute him for that considering the heavy situation. Great stuff, as usual, D.N.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

He actually did it involuntary and afterwards understood its importance. Thanks a lot for your nice words and appreciation, Gerald! 😊😊😊

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Gerald Washington's avatar

Gotcha. Secretly, I was hoping the boyfriend got left in hell. You're most welcome, Nevena! 😁😁😁

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Ahaha

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Mariana's Land of Magic's avatar

Lovely story, Nevena! It was really intense and made me think of how easy it is to lose even our last chance if we make a not-so-good decision. But fortunately, they did not lose it.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

It's great you love it! I'm still posting my old Medium stories - maybe I'll soon get to the point where you know them. :)

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Mariana's Land of Magic's avatar

I will read them with pleasure once again... ❤️

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Misbah Sheikhh's avatar

I absolutely loved this one, Nevena! Your writing is always so rich in emotional depth, and this piece is no exception. ❤

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Thank you so much, dear friend!❤️

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Kay Flanagan's avatar

I loved the ending too. Your description of the heat and the burning flesh had me wincing and admiring your style.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Happy to make you cringe. :) I thought up this story after reading a sci fi book about a nuclear explosion…and what happens to people. It was…well… 🥵

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Debdutta Pal's avatar

Love the ending. I was rooting for them (the couple). Second chances make my heart melt.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Yeah, mine too! Thank you, Debdutta! ❤️

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Muniba Kasi's avatar

My favorite fiction writer Nevena.

Fantastic read love the read❤️

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