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Debdutta Pal's avatar

That's it, I'm ditching my smart phone. This felt so real. Loved it.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

that's why I got a smartphone just three years ago. :)

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Gerald Washington's avatar

The rabbit and those boys saved the day! That hot liquid part made me think a volcano erupted in that hole. I'm happy I was wrong about that part. Great story, Nevena! :)

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Thanks a lot, Gerald! It’s difficult to keep up here but I’m trying. :)

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Gerald Washington's avatar

You’re welcome! I hear you. It’s starting to become a challenge for me to keep up on here. All we can do is do the best we can. :)

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Kay Flanagan's avatar

You brought me on a sensory walk through the forest, whipping up tension along the route.

Amazing storytelling Nevena.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Thank you, Key!

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Jessey Anthony's avatar

Wow! Listening to the grasshoppers sing, watching the trees wave is a pretty sight.

I love watching the trees swing side to side and the birds chirping from my balcony. Nature rewards us everyday if we know how to see its beauty.

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