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Gerald Washington's avatar

Ahhh... beauty isn't everything. It's great to see the other side of it and the perspectives too. Hang in there, Dan!😀

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Poor Dan, I think he needs to find the fairy and get his old looks back. :)))

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Gerald Washington's avatar

Yes! Go, Dan. Go to the fairy. She’ll make it right again. :)))

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Debdutta Pal's avatar

As a not normal person, I'd have done the same thing!

Lovely story. I wish it goes viral. 🥹

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Ohhh thanks a million for your lovely comment! ❤️

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Tombarriesimmons's avatar

Brilliant little story, not the ending I was expecting, which made me smile – and smiles of what we could all do with, couldn't we?

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Thanks a million, Tom! You made me smile!🙂

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Kay Flanagan's avatar

I liked the subversion but also that hint that making assumptions about physical appearance either way is problematic.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

True! Thank you, Kay! 💖

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Sana's avatar

Love this! Can’t wait for more!

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Thank you, Sana! :)

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Andy Bates's avatar

"A mouth like a stolen kiss," stunning. Really enjoyed this

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Thank you so much, Andy! It's a pleasure. :)

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Posy Churchgate's avatar

I had an inkling the message would be 'careful what you wish for' but I liked the fresh spin you put on the fairytale message.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Yeah, exactly, but I loved playing the image of the fairy. :)))

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Jessey Anthony's avatar

Oh my, this is a brilliant lesson. We are often chasing shadows, get envious about what others have and fail to appreciate the things we gave.

I bet Dan is regretting his decision of having a the perfect body. You don't need a perfect body to be loved. Can't wait for the next chapter.

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Nevena Pascaleva's avatar

Thank you, Jessey! Yes, if only we could see how beautiful we are...each one of us. :)

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Nazish Nasim's avatar

Loved the ending!

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