This story is absolutely mesmerizing Ava! I love the blend of sci-fi and philosophical depth--it is so thought-provoking. It really makes one reflect on identity, existence, and what it means to transcend humanity. It is both unsettling and awe-inspiring. What inspired you to explore immortality and divinity in this way?
Thank you so much for your comment, Karen. This story was a response to a prompt - “What would you be without your name?” - and the answer just came. 😊
it's wild and it parallels what's happening now and what's been happening probably since the beginning of time although it doesn't go back that far. It shows the future. I think you'll really like it 😉
What a great read! It kept me on the edge of my seat until the end. And I had to read it twice because I didn't believe it at first! What a great ending! Thanks. You are very talented.
This is awesome! I love this take on things. Just like you said in your note, I can't quite decide if this is a dystopia or a utopia either. In some ways, I like the idea of identity being erased, and the positive spin you put on it, connecting the no-longer-an-individual to the rest of humanity. However, only belonging to a collective, instead of having your own personal autonomy is an issue unto itself. This one had got my cogs whirring, so thank you for that!
I love how Ava just rolled with it. Like, ‘Cool, I’m God now.’ And respect for the voice-over! I know how it is as a fellow non-native English speaker 😊😅 Love it!
You are the queen of long paragraphs, I feel breathless (in a good way).
I'll return to take notes. This was amazing.
Oh, thanks a lot, Debdutta! This story is a bit amateurish so I’m really happy you liked it. 😊❤️
This was superb! Thanks, Nevena! 💗
Thank you, my dear Misbah! ❤️
…And life went on again :)
What a great -so much ideas here-story!!
Write moreeeeee 👋😁👌
Thanks a lot, Angela! Your words are so encouraging!🙂
Lovely, it draws you in with curiosity right from the start!
Thank you, Raven!❤️
So you DO know what immortality really is
Oh, I have no way to know. But I love playing with possible answers. :)
This story is absolutely mesmerizing Ava! I love the blend of sci-fi and philosophical depth--it is so thought-provoking. It really makes one reflect on identity, existence, and what it means to transcend humanity. It is both unsettling and awe-inspiring. What inspired you to explore immortality and divinity in this way?
Thank you so much for your comment, Karen. This story was a response to a prompt - “What would you be without your name?” - and the answer just came. 😊
That is the best!!! high five🙌
Have you seen the series Halo on Paramont+ ? I think you’d enjoy it based on your writing 😉
I just checked it, seems interesting! Good visuals and scenery. I'll set it aside for the spring break. :)))
it's wild and it parallels what's happening now and what's been happening probably since the beginning of time although it doesn't go back that far. It shows the future. I think you'll really like it 😉
Great!
Ava becomes God, is just mind-blowing. 😁It's a hopeful vision, in a way, but also makes you consider what might be lost in the process. 😅
Maybe we are supposed to remain what we are? 🙂❤️
What a great read! It kept me on the edge of my seat until the end. And I had to read it twice because I didn't believe it at first! What a great ending! Thanks. You are very talented.
Thanks a lot, Amy! That's so encouraging to hear! 💖
This is awesome! I love this take on things. Just like you said in your note, I can't quite decide if this is a dystopia or a utopia either. In some ways, I like the idea of identity being erased, and the positive spin you put on it, connecting the no-longer-an-individual to the rest of humanity. However, only belonging to a collective, instead of having your own personal autonomy is an issue unto itself. This one had got my cogs whirring, so thank you for that!
Thank you, Nicole! Maybe it's a question of finding your identity through otherness. A complex issue. If we understand this, we'll understand God. :)
This was so cerebral and cool, I liked it a lot!
Ohh that’s great, thank you so much!
I love how Ava just rolled with it. Like, ‘Cool, I’m God now.’ And respect for the voice-over! I know how it is as a fellow non-native English speaker 😊😅 Love it!
I wouldn’t have done it if I hadn’t heard yours! Bravery is contagious! 😊😊😊And thanks a lot for your comment. 😊
Lovely story. I like how you read it too. ❤️
It reminds me of Clifford Cymuck's style.
I haven't thought of that, but yes, in a way...:)))
Very nice
Thank you!
I loved it!
I’m happy! :)
Liked it! Interesting to think about immortality, real immortality.